The puissant painting ever – Poem by Shraddha
The sun is about to set,
Jerking as the sky thunders,
Comes the untimely raindrops,
Blurring the picture I painted all this while,
And Oh! I see my heart turnover,
Ah … my painting!!!
Petrified to see my trees fall,
My beautiful flowers gloom away,
My mountains fragment,
The stars up above and fishes down below, all disappear,
Here I stand with my brush, gulping down – impuissant.
I heard, “You can scrap it or blend it.”
Blend it? But how? Just when I thought scraping was an easier option.
The paper was dry and the sky was dark,
I was really trying to retain the mountain’s spark,
Then in place of flowers the seeds emerged,
In place of brown – green trees, the pathways surged,
The stars reflecting in the water below,
There came out a wonderful scene,
With more roads to follow and rooting the seeds,
Though not beautiful as the previous one,
It surely was the puissant one!
This moment I knew, others say ‘Easier said than done’,
Rarely you fathom that feeling crestfallen is just not done.
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5 Comments
Nihal Pai
Very well written!!! Keep it up!!!
Satish Kumar Sharma
The description of the painting is more puissant ✨
The painting looked an ordinary piece of work, but the words made me look it in a completely different angle. That’s the power of words.
Srishti Jha
So beautifully described❤❤
Giulia
Intriguing! I like it 🙂
Ginelle Stavio Gonsalves
This gave me goosebumps !
C’était vraiment puissant. (This was really powerful) ❤️